crit response- assign. 5

Image 1
The play on reality is working in this image. It’s an illusion that my subject is not a real person. It’s also unclear as to why she was placed in a pumpkin, not knowing if she broke free or stumbled upon it. From here, pairing small figures with normal sized objects could create a series of illusions.

Image 2
Many interpreted this image as gloves or other leather objects. It was not recognized right away as boots, which is what I was striving for. The unique composition is working well in that it abstracts the boots. More contrast could have been used and the background is a little over exposed. From here, a series of abstract still lives could be created.

Image 3
Not many viewers realized I placed a figure in an advertisement. They though I took the picture of the girl looking down and photo shopped another figure next to her. Since this is what I wanted to accomplish, the play with reality is working well. A series of subtle disturbances of advertisements could be instated.

Image 4
My narrative was well interpreted, as it is pretty straightforward. The series of pictures and humor behind them is working well in this image. It would be interesting to add in a photo to let the viewer know where the magnet is, by adding a finger putting on the clothes or an idea of where the background is. A series of the David is normal day life could be created, humanizing the magnet.