crit response- assign. 2

Image one: adornment
In this image, the way I positioned my model is working in the image. Her expression and body language is also intriguing. This image, however, needs more contrast and the angel of the subject’s head makes her face a little distorted. These are things I need to improve on in this photo. As a jumping off point, I could photograph other subjects longing for something or adorn them with an item of importance.
Image 2: angles
In this image, the contrast lighting is working well. What was said to be interesting about this image is how my model is dressed up in costume-like clothes but has a calm expression and looks relaxed, unlike her clothes. I could improve this image by lightening the wall behind the subject to make her stand out more. From here, I could photograph other subjects is costume with unfitting expressions.

Image 3: painting recreation
This image is a recreation of a painting and the best thing about this image is the body language. It was said that my model holding the apple was innovative and brought my own sense of style to this recreation. Something I could improve on is lighting my model properly. Since she is wearing a brimmed hat, the eyes are too dark and are unable to be seen. Other recreations of paintings could be a jumping-off point from here, making sure to modernize them in my own way.

Image 4: props
What is working about this image is my model’s position. It looks as if the background is what she’s thinking about, making her body language correspond to the picture. Something I could improve on is the angle I took the image from in that I was below my model, making the background a little warped. A jumping off point from here could be photographing subjects in settings that appear to be his or her thoughts.