the first ones in both sets are the ones i like the most. I think they could use a little bit more contrast...maybe try playing with the curves a little bit, to get something thats just right, so you dont lose too much definition.
I love the one with the arm stretched out and the thing partially blocking her face. It's provoking. The tree/bike one is nice too, although it is a little busy.
I think they all look amazing! I really like the first 2, second one looks like it should be in a magazine. I think your composition is really good in all of them, nice work!
The third one is my favorite, but I love the background in the last one. The first one uses very nice contrast..maybe add a little more contrast to the second one? Good job :)
i like the last one the most. the detailed background on the top left is very interesting comparing to the figure in black. the third photo has a very interesting perspective.
of these, i would pick the first and third. the third one might use a bit more contrast. the third one is just so interesting how we see a tiny sliver of the subject's face behind the apple. you have obscured the face creating an interesting illusion. the composition in the last one is good.
I love the 3rd composition! It is very creative but simple. I think the 2nd and the last photos have too much going on in them. But you did a great job in using lighting.
I like the first two ones the best, I like the contrast and the interesting background on the last one too but it seems to me her face was not relaxed and the posing a bit awkward for her, maybe if her hand was down it would be my pick...Nice lighting in all photos :)
The last one is very interesting with the background with so many textures and details and then the simple figure - usually it's vice versa. Your range in darks and lights is nice throughout all your photos.
These photos are beautiful. I love the one with the bikes, but I almost wish there was more contrast between the head and the background. I also love the implied texture and patterns in the photos!
the first ones in both sets are the ones i like the most. I think they could use a little bit more contrast...maybe try playing with the curves a little bit, to get something thats just right, so you dont lose too much definition.
ReplyDeleteI love the one with the arm stretched out and the thing partially blocking her face. It's provoking. The tree/bike one is nice too, although it is a little busy.
ReplyDeleteI think they all look amazing! I really like the first 2, second one looks like it should be in a magazine. I think your composition is really good in all of them, nice work!
ReplyDeleteThe third one is my favorite, but I love the background in the last one. The first one uses very nice contrast..maybe add a little more contrast to the second one? Good job :)
ReplyDeleteComposition is nice in all of them, but I really like the contrast in the first one.
ReplyDeletei like the last one the most. the detailed background on the top left is very interesting comparing to the figure in black.
ReplyDeletethe third photo has a very interesting perspective.
of these, i would pick the first and third. the third one might use a bit more contrast. the third one is just so interesting how we see a tiny sliver of the subject's face behind the apple. you have obscured the face creating an interesting illusion. the composition in the last one is good.
ReplyDeleteI love the 3rd composition! It is very creative but simple. I think the 2nd and the last photos have too much going on in them. But you did a great job in using lighting.
ReplyDelete1. Maybe find some way to lighten the wall? I think it would increase the contrast and keep the viewer on the face
ReplyDelete2. Her face is just out of focus…that's the only thing I would change…her posture is great
3. That's awesome
4. Great capture…I have no suggestions
I like the first two ones the best, I like the contrast and the interesting background on the last one too but it seems to me her face was not relaxed and the posing a bit awkward for her, maybe if her hand was down it would be my pick...Nice lighting in all photos :)
ReplyDeleteThe last one is very interesting with the background with so many textures and details and then the simple figure - usually it's vice versa. Your range in darks and lights is nice throughout all your photos.
ReplyDeleteThese photos are beautiful. I love the one with the bikes, but I almost wish there was more contrast between the head and the background. I also love the implied texture and patterns in the photos!
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